Introduction to MWA 1

With my first major writing assignment it was very difficult for me to get back into the grove of writing an essay. My paper was about how customers differ from a service employee. I explained that the relationships between them differ but at the same time have the same views of what actions need to be taken. In this paper I felt I had good examples because I once was the service employee and a customer. Although I had good examples some of my peers felt that I needed to express them more in order to clarify the paper. Two major problems that I had in the first paper was the usage of "I" and my punctuations. Within the first page of my first MWA I counted about 12 times that I used the word "I", when I should not have.